张培基英译散文《文学批评无用论》赏析

　　季羡林老先生的《文学批评无用论》非常有名，其中张培基将其译成英文。大家来赏析下人家是怎么翻译的吧。

 

　　文学批评无用论On the Futility of Literary Criticism

 

　　季羡林Ji Xianlin

 

　　译文摘自张培基《英译中国散文选一》

 

　　读最近一期的《文学评论》，里面有几篇关于“红学” 的文章，引起了我的注意。有的作者既反省，又批判。有的作者从困境中找出路。有的作者慨叹，“红学”出危机。如此等等，煞是热闹。文章的论点都非常精彩，很有启发。但是，我却忽然想到了一个怪问题：这样的“红学”有用处吗？对红学家本身，对在大学里和研究所里从事文学理论研究的人，当然有用。但是对广大的《红楼梦》的读者呢？我看是没有用处。

 

　　In the latest issue of the Literary Review, several articles on Redology have attracted my attention. Some of the authors are introspective as well as critical; some try to find a way out of their academic predicament; some sigh with regret that Redology is faced with a crisis; and so on and so forth. The discussion is quite animated. The arguments set forth in articles are very interesting and enlightening. Nevertheless, a strange question has occurred to me: Is this kind of Redology of any use at all? It is of course useful to the Redologists themselves as well as to those engaged in the study of literary theory at universities and research institutes. But, to my mind, it is of little use to readers of A Dream of Red Mansions at large.

 

　　要点：

 

　　1、“红学”指研究古典文学《红楼梦》的学问，可译为Hongloumeng scholarship，但不如Redology简洁。Redology是由Red加词尾-ology（学）构成。

 

　　2、“反省”译为introspective，和self-examining同义。

 

　　3、“慨叹”=sigh with regret/emotion,或lament with regret ,这类词文学翻译中很常见（因为文学就是感慨和抒怀的嘛~），平时要注意积累，基本逃不掉lament bemoan, moan这些~

 

　　4、“如此等等，煞是热闹”中的“如此等等”是修饰前面列举的内容，“煞是热闹”是形容讨论之激烈，因此分开译为”…; and so on and so forth. The discussion is quite animated.” 体现了英文结构清晰的特点。

 

　　5、“广大的……读者”译为readers of …at large，其中at large是成语，和as a whole或in general同义。

 

　　6、“我看”意即“我认为”，现用成语to my mind表达。

 

　　综述：本文为一篇小品文，是考试中常考的文体，一般作者都是采用幽默诙谐的语言风格描写一种现象，翻译时要尽量贴近作者的语言风格

 

　　《红楼梦》问世二百年以来，通过汉文原文和各种译文读过本书的人，无虑多少个亿。这样多的读者哪一个是先看批评家的文章，然后再让批评家牵着鼻子走，按图索骥地去读原作呢？我看是绝无仅有。

 

　　Ever since the publication of this novel some 200 years ago, hundreds of millions of people have read its Chinese original or its translations in various languages. Of these innumerable people, how many have read the novel by starting with a perusal of critics’ articles and allowing themselves to be led by the nose by the critics as to how to read the novel? Next to none.

 

　　要点：

 

　　1、“问世二百年以来”实际上是“问世约二百年以来”，故译为Ever since the publication of… some 200years ago，其中some是添加成分，作“大约”解。

 

　　2、“哪一个是先看批评家的文章，然后再让批评家牵着鼻子走，按图索骥地去读原作呢？”译为how many have read the novel by starting with a perusal of the critics’ articles and allowing themselves to be led by the nose by the critics as to how to read the novel？

 

　　① 文中的“哪一个“并没有直译为which one,而是根据意思意思译为了how many

 

　　② “先…”可译为start with sth

 

　　③“被…牵着鼻子走”直译为be led by the nose by sth/sb

 

　　④“按图索骥“在这里指”按批评家的指点去读原作“，其意思已包括在上面译文中，故略而不译。

 

　　3，“绝无仅有”作“极其少有”解，译为Next to none，和Almost none同义。

 

　　综述：这个本段注意那个问句的翻译~

 

　　一切文学作品，特别是像《红楼梦》这样伟大的作品，内容异常地丰富，涉及到的社会层面异常地多，简直像是一个宝山，一座迷宫。而读者群就更为复杂，不同的家庭背景，不同的社会经历，不同的民族，不同的国家，不同的文化传统，不同的心理素质，不同的年龄，不同的性别，不同的职业，不同的爱好——还可以这样“不同”下去，就此打住——，他们来读《红楼梦》，会各就自己的特点，欣赏《红楼梦》中的某一个方面，受到鼓舞，受到启发，引起了喜爱；也可能受到打击，引起了憎恶，总之是千差万别。

 

　　All literary works, especially a monumental one like A Dream of Red Mansions, are extremely rich in content and involve diverse social strata – to such an extent that they virtually resemble a mountain of treasure or a labyrinth. And the readers are even more complicated, differing from each other in family background, social experience, nationality, country, cultural tradition, psychological condition, age, sex, profession, hobby, etc., etc. The list could go on endlessly, so I wouldn’t mind stopping here. They will each appreciate a certain aspect of the novel according to their own individuality. They may feel inspired and enlightened, and hence love it, or they may feel hurt, and hence loathe it. In short, the reactions vary.

 

　　要点：

 

　　1、“特别是像《红楼梦》这样伟大的作品”译为especially a monumental one like A Dream of Red Mansions，其中monumental意为“重要的，意义深远的，不朽的“比great更有力，更不朽（immortal）的意思。

 

　　2、to such an extent that 意即”到如此程度以至于…”，此处为增译成分，之前我们也见过不少的增译关联词或表顺承的短语，增强行文语气，使译文更加流畅~

 

　　3、本段用了一共出现了10出“不同的”！！是明显得不能再明显的句式相同的结构啊，要合并啊同志们~因此译文只用一个differ from就把它们解决了O__O “…

 

　　4、“还可以这样‘不同‘下去，就此打住”可以理解为“这样的不同还有很多，因此呢我就不一一列举了”。译者转换说法译为The list could go on endlessly, so I wouldn’t mind stopping here意即“这样的栗子还有很多，所以我不介意在这里停下”言外之意就是“反正栗子还有很多，我就不一一列举了”，这个绕啊~

 

　　5、“也可能受到打击”中的“打击”作“刺痛”或“感情受到创伤”等解，不宜按字面直译为feel attacked。现全句译为or they may feel hurt。

 

　　6、“受到鼓舞，受到启发，引起了喜爱；也可能受到打击，引起了憎恶，“译为They may feel inspired and enlightened, and hence love it, or they may feel hurt, and hence loathe it.这是我们说了无数次的分句合译合译合译~主语不必多说，就是”读者“嘛，逻辑关系——因果思密达~

 

　　综述: 注意分句合译~本段虽长但是不难译

 

　　对这些读者来说，“红学家”就好像是住在“太虚幻境” 里的圣人、贤人，与自己无关。他们不管“红学家”究竟议论些什么，只是读下去，读下去。

 

　　因此我说，文学批评家无用。

 

　　不但对读者无用，对作者也无用。查一查各国文学史，我敢说，没有哪一个伟大作家是根据文学批评家的理论来进行创作的。

 

　　To them, the Redologists seem to be sages and men of virtue residing in the “Illusory Land of Great Void” and having nothing whatsoever to do with them. They just read on and on, caring not what the Redologists may say.

 

　　Therefore, I reiterate, literary criticism is useless.

 

　　It is useless not only to the readers, but also to writers. Looking up the literary history of each and every country, I dare say that none of the world’s great literary figures ever did their writing in line with the theory of literary critics.

 

　　要点：

 

　　1、 太虚幻境”引自《红楼梦》第五回，曾被译为Great Void Illusion Land和Illusory Land of great void等。

 

　　2、 文中将“圣人“译为sage,”贤人”译为men of virtue,这是因为在儒家文化里，“贤人”是指“善良，品德高尚的人”以上两个栗子我们再次婶婶地体会到国学底蕴对于翻译的重要性~~

 

　　3、 这里的“根据”一词，译为in line with，非文学翻译中它也是个重点词，除了下文使用的in accordance with ，常见的还有consistent with, be in keeping with,可以让手里的according to歇会儿了。。。

 

　　综述：注意“根据“一词的同义词~

 

　　那么，文学批评家的研究不就是毫无意义了吗？也不是的。他们根据自己的文学欣赏的才能，根据不同时代潮流，对文学作品提出自己的看法，互相争论，互相学习，互相启发，互相提高，这也是一种创作活动，对文学理论的建设会有很大的好处。只是不要幻想，自己的理论会对读者和作者有多大影响。这样一来，就可以各安其业，天下太平了。

 

　　On the other hand, however, does it follow that the research done by literary critics is totally meaningless? No, that is not true either. In accordance with their own capacity for literary appreciation and the different historical trends, the views they put forward for mutual discussion, study, inspiration and improvement are also something creative and conducive to the development of literary theory. Only they should be under no illusion about their theories exerting powerful influence on the readership or writers. That is the way for each to have a role of his own to play and for peace to reign under heaven.

 

　　要点：

 

　　1、“文学批评家的研究不就是毫无意义了吗？”译为does it follow that the research done by literary critics is totally meaningless?其中it is follow that 意为“意味着”，如And, if it is, does it follow that globalisation has been a failure because its benefits have been pinched by the rich?（如果成立，是否意味着全球化已经是一个失败——因为其益处都被富人偷走了？）

 

　　2、“不要幻想”=be under no illusion about

 

　　3、“这样一来”译为that the way for sb to…，跟它功能相同还有in so doing,as a result, these efforts will allow us。。。,这种表示顺承的短语通常会作为增译的成分出现，使行文更加流畅~

 

　　4、”各安其业“=has its own position to play

 

　　“天下太平“=peace reign over the land/under the heaven

 

　　综述：

 

　　注意本段讲的表顺承的短语，四字语的翻译之前讲了很多，本段的”各安其业,天下太平“还需加入积累队列~

 

　　上面这些话其实只有幼儿园的水平，可是还没有见有什么人这样坦率地说出来。就让我当一个“始作俑者”吧！

 

　　What I’ve said above is only skin-deep, of kindergarten level. But so far none else have ventured to be equally candid. Therefore, let me be reconciled to being saddled with the epithet of “originator of a bad practice”.

 

　　要点：

 

　　1、“上面的这些话其实只有幼儿园的水平”译为what I’ve said above is only skin-deep, of kindergarten level，其中skin-deep（肤浅的）是添加成分，用以衬托of kindergarten level。 此句将直译和意译相结合，既保留了原文的修辞手法，又令意思明朗直白~

 

　　2、have ventured to意为“冒险做某事”如Some of the refugees say that they have ventured north to check on their houses but did not feel safe enough to stay.

 

　　（有难民说，他们冒着生命危险回到北方，去看看自己的房子是否还在，但觉得那里依然不是安身之所。）

 

　　3、“就让我当一个‘始作俑者’吧！”（始作俑者：第一个做某项坏事的人或恶劣风气的开创者~）意即“姑且接受‘始作俑者’的称号吧！”现按此意译为Therefore, let me be reconciled to（接受） being saddled with（背负） the epithet(绰号) of “originator of a bad practice“。

 

　　综述：

 

　　本段语言幽默，译者分别采用直译和意译或二者结合的手段，既传达了意思，又再现了原文风格，这是我们追求的终极目标。